Zdravím :) viem, neskoro, no predsa lepšie ako nič :) skôr sa bohužiaľ nedalo :) nie som veľmi nadšená z tejto jednodielovky, hlavne kvôli tomu koncu, pretože už som to potrebovala nejako zakončiť tak je to také uponáhľané mám pocit, no hádam sa vám to bude páčiť :) taktiež mala byť táto časť po slovensky podľa ankety, lenže som si chcela vyskúšať, či by som to zvládla napísať po anglicky takže tak :) a dostala som aj ďalší nápad na jednodielovku, hoci by tam viac pasoval Harry, uvidíme či bude so Zaynom alebo s Liamom :) vyjadrite sa, s kým by ste ju chceli :) možno dám s oboma :)
Why do I have to do everything? I asked myself and went to the
kitchen to make lunch. I knew how to cook and the boys got used to it. And
now I was something like their chef. At first it was fun, but now it was
getting on my nerves. But no excuses helped me, so I resigned and did what
they wanted me to do.
I picked up some
stuff from the fridge and started to prepare them. After about an hour I
finished and the lunch was ready.
“Boys, come to eat!”
I called them. They run through all rooms and came to the table like retards. I
rolled my eyes and put all the meals on the table. I sat down and scooped up
the food on my plate. The boys were looking at me like I did something wrong.
“What?” I asked with
my mouth full.
“Nothing,” said Louis
and took the food too. Other boys continued. What were they expecting? That I will act like a servant and give the
full plate before them? No way! They have their own hands, I thought to
myself starting to be angry.
When I finished
eating, I got up from the table and went to my room.
“And don´t forget to
wash dishes!” I shouted on my way and partially angry I went upstairs. I had to
calm down, so I put some casual clothes on and went out. No goodbye, no
explanations where I´m going, I just closed the door behind me loudly and get
on my car.
I didn´t know where
I´m going I just needed to me some time alone. Last few days I´d been thinking
about leaving the band but then it got better. But we had been arguing almost
every day and hadn´t speak to each other. And finally Paul had to come and
solve it.
After that it was
okey but I still felt kinda nervous and so on. And now I wanted to think over
that and find a solution. Well, the
solution had been made but I still wasn´t satisfied. I needed to arrange all
the thought in my head.
All the way I was
thinking and suddenly I found myself on the road to the beach next to London. I
wasn’t planning to go there. My unconscious took the control and drove me
there. I didn´t wanted to change the way so I kept going. When I came on the
place, I parked my car on some cart-road and walk to the sea.
The beach was stony
and I didn´t have right footwear so my feet were hurting. I came to the sea and
looked to the horizon of the sea. It was the end of autumn so the sun was
falling early and now it was sunset. Only the half of it was seen but it was
beautiful.
My unconscious knew where to go, I thought to myself. I looked
around for some place to sit down. On the right there was a reefs and huge
stones so I went there and climbed up to the biggest. I sat down with my legs
crossed and looked down where the water was smashing to the reefs. It was the
perfect place.
I thought of the
past, presence and future and decided that if I and the boys don’t want to end
up singing, we have to make some compromises. And the first will be that we
will change with cooking and other stuff. After a couple of hour sitting and
watching the sea, my mind was finally “clean” and I decided to go home and
speak to the boys.
As I was leaving I
noticed two crazy girls were running about the beach and laughing. I stopped
for a minute and stared at them. They were both very pretty, but the blond one
caught my eye. I was like hypnotized and she was like an angel.
Suddenly she tripped
over the stone and fell down. Her friend was running to her with a shock in the
face and kneeled to her. I was like a statue, I couldn´t move till I heard the
terrible scream.
“Abby!!!”screamed the
girl loudly. “Wake up!!!” she shaked with her body. Abby wasn´t moving. “O my
god! Somebody help!!!!!” she shouted and my legs finally started to move. I ran
to her with my best and kneeled next to Abby against her friend.
“What´s happened?” I
asked nervously.
“She felt and
fainted. She must have hurt her head!” she said through tears.
“I have a car near. Let´s
go!” I said fast and took Abby on my arms. I hurried to the car followed by the
brunette one and put her on the back seat. Her friend got up next to her and I
sat behind the steering wheel. I started up and turn on the GPS to the nearest
hospital.
It was silent during
the ride. Only the girl´s sobs were heard. When we got there, I took Abby on my
arms against and went to the hospital. Then the doctor came and took her
immediately to the examination. I filled the papers with her friend helping and
then we sat and waited.
It seemed as hours
but after about 10 minutes doctor came out and said:
“She´s okey. She
suffered concussion but it was very weak. She will wake up every minute. You
can go to see her. When she wakes up, she can go home.”
“Okey, thank you,” I
said and follow the girl to the room to see Abby. She was sitting on the bed
and holding Abby´s hand. I stood next to window and waited till she wakes up.
Suddenly she opened her eyes and looked confused.
“Where am I?” she
asked.
“Don´t worry. You´re
at the hospital.”
“Olivia! What
happened?!” she said loudly and sat.
“It´s okey. You fell
and he drove us to the hospital.”
“Who?”
“He,” pointed Olivia
at me.
“Hi,” I waved.
“Hi? You seem
familiar to me.”
“Well … if you´re
okey, i´d better go,” I said and aimed to the corridor.
“Thank you,” she said
on the halfway and I turned to her.
“You´re welcome,” I
smiled and went out to my car. I got in and closed the door behind me. Ou, gosh. What´s wrong with me? I won´t
probably see her anymore. You have to wake up, Harry! I said to myself and
started up the engine. Next minute I´ve been on my way home with weird feeling
in my chest that pulled me back. I ignored it and came home.
“Hi, guys!” I shouted
and went to the living room.
“Harry! Where have
you been?” Louis asked.
“What are you? My
mum?!” I replied. “Nevermind, I wanted to talk with all of you about
something.”
“About what?” Zayn
asked.
“I´m not willing to
be a slave here so no more cooking. We should change or hire some chef.”
“Well, if that´s all
we could change with cooking,” said Liam. I didn´t expected so much
understanding.
“Okey then. That´s
all for now,” I said a little bit surprised and sat to the armchair.
“What are we going to
do?” asked Louis.
“Eat!” shouted Niall.
“No, we can´t,” said
Liam. “Today our new stylist should come and prepare us for the show. Paul said
she is still attending school and she needs some experience. It´s his friend´s
daughter, I think.”
“But we can watch a
movie till she comes, right?”
“I think yes,” nodded
Liam and I turned the TV on.
“What do you wanna
see?”
“What about that new
movie, Lou gave us?”
“Good idea,” I
smiled. “What is it about?”
“No idea. Probably
something romantic, but you never know.”
“Okey, let´s check
it,” I said and turned the play button. The subtitles were going and suddenly
the bell rang.
“She´s probably
here,” said Liam and went to open. I stopped the movie and tightened my ears to
hear what is going on there.
“Hi, you must be the
new stylist, right?” said Liam.
“Yes, that´s me,”
said the girl which voice I found familiar.
“Okey, then come in.
What´s your name?”
“Abby.”
Am I dreaming? Familiar voice. Girl with the
same name as the blonde one from hospital. I wondered if it´s really her or just my ears
are out of service when suddenly Liam stepped in followed by my blonde angel.
“Guys, this is Abby,
our new stylist, Abby this is Louis, Niall, Zayn, Harry and I´m Liam.”
I couldn´t take my
eye from her and she stared at me too. After a while it started to be strange
to other and Louis asked.
“Do you know each
other?”
“We met today,”
smiled.
“He saved my life,”
she whispered.
“It was not such a
big thing.”
“It counts,” she
smiled. “Now I know why you were familiar to me. Okey, let´s start, for example
with you Liam. Come on,” she clapped and take Liam away. I was hoping she will
choose me so we could talk but it didn´t happen. So I had to wait. After a
couple of minutes Liam came in overdressed and from upstairs Abby shouted
Niall´s name. Then it was Zayn and Louis. I was the last one.
When she finally
called me, I was so nervous and happy in the same time I almost exploded. In
that little time something was attracting me to her. I wasn´t in love, at least
I thought that. When I came in to the room where she was, my heart fastened. I
almost forgot to breathe when I saw her.
“Sit down!” she said
simply and I obeyed. In next few minutes we were completely silent. I wanted to
talk to her but suddenly I couldn´t. I needed to take my courage and it lasted
couple of minutes. Finally she finished and packed her things ready to leave.
“Please, wait,” I
whispered. She stopped in the middle of her way and turned to me. I was looking
at her trying to think of what I wanted to say. That I like her? That she´s the most beautiful girl I have ever seen?
That I would be the happiest person if she went out with me?
“Sooo?” I looked at
me with a gaze.
“Well, it´s hard to
tell but … “ I murmured and came closer to her.
“What?”
“I can show you,” I
smiled and reduced the distance between us. She was looking right to my eyes
and no surprise or fear showed on her face. I was a little bit flabbergasted
but I finally decided for sure.
Reducing the space
between us, my face was only a few inches from her and our bodies were
touching. She didn´t pull so I took it as a good sign. Finally when I looked at
her lips I couldn´t waste no more time. I joined our lips in sweet gentle kiss
and deepened it to passionate struggle.
Then I pulled away a
little bit and looked into her eyes.
“I don´t know if I´m
in love because we´ve just met but I would be very happy if you tried it with
me.”
“I´m sorry, I can´t,”
she whispered silently and looked at her feet.
“Why?”
“Because even if my
heart beats faster than ever, I don´t wanna be just another girl on your list.
I´m sorry,” she said sadly and walked out of the room. I stayed there in
absolute shock and didn´t believe in what just had happened.
“No! Abby! Wait!!!” I
screamed suddenly and went along. I ran out of the house just when she was
getting on the bus. I ran there but the doors were closing. I didn´t think and
put my leg between them.
“Ouch!!!” I shouted
loudly when the doors pressed my foot. The driver instantly opened them but it
hurt as hell. She was looking at me like I was the craziest person on the
Earth.
“Please, listen to
me,” I said through the pain.
“No, Harry. This is
useless.”
“I´ve never felt like
this before.”
“But we know each
other only a day. No, only a few hours!”
“I know but what we
can lose if we try it?”
“Time?”
“I won´t regret it
and I would be happy if you neither.”
“I don´t know,
Harry!”
“Just say yes so we
can go!” shouted somebody from the bus as we´d been talking through the doors.
“Okey then. Let´s try
it,” she smiled and I hurried in to hug her. I forgot on my hurt foot and the
pain hit me.
“You should go to the
doctor. Let me take you there and we´ll be quits,” she laughed and got off the
bus. I couldn´t be happier.
Nechápem čo sa ti na tej jednodielovke nepáči :) Je krásna!A dosť sa čudujem tomu že som jej rozumela :D aspon viem že niečo z angličtiny aj rozumiem :D :) Je krásna! :)
OdpovedaťOdstrániťdakujem :)
OdstrániťWuá:D Je to úžasné:D:) Obdivuju tě za to, že si měla odvahu to napsat a obdivuju tvou anglickou slovní zásobu:) Je to doopravdy pěkné:)) A další jednodílovka.. Byla bych pro Zayna:D:) Ale i Liam je úžasnej, takže je to jedno:)
OdpovedaťOdstrániťJen tak dál:) Bude zítra část?:)
dakujem pekne :) slovna zasoba niektora a la google translator :D :D
Odstrániťje to úžasne ..konečne niečo po anglicky ! ..ale ja to nechápem ..ako niekto dokáže takto využívat slovnu zásobu ..ja rozumiem všetkemu ale ked mám niečo napísat tak je to len "i love " "i like " "i hate " :DDD takže ta obdivujem .a ešte raz musím povedat že ta jednodiela je úžasna !!! aj ked tý čo po anglicky nevedia budú asi nahnevaní lebo prišli o vela :D :)
OdpovedaťOdstrániťdakujem krasne :) taketo slova dokazu vzdy potesit :) a neboj, ja som na tom rovnako :) minule sme mali na skole americkeho vice ambasadora a som mu vsetko rozumela, no ked pride na rozpravanie tak to je horsie :) ja tiez este slovnik alebo prekladac musim pri niektorych slovickach pouzivat :)
OdstrániťSuper je to :)
OdpovedaťOdstrániťvdaka :)
OdstrániťJe to super, príbeh sa mi páčil,veľmi:-) nechcem si kaziť dojem kritizovaním tvojej angličtiny,sama si písala že si sa to snažila písať jednoduchšie, nie všetko bolo tak ako malo byť, ale to je len malá chybička krásy, ktorá sa samozrejme dá napraviť. Každopádne musím aj tak pochváliť to ako vieš využiť slovnú zásobu :)
OdpovedaťOdstrániťvdaka :) ja viem, ta gramatika uplne od veci tam je :D som ju vobec nekontrolovala a aj keby ze hej tak tam mam kopu chyb :)
OdstrániťAre you kidding me? It´s perfect! :) Ale fakt, vôbec nemáš byť prečo nespokojná. Uvítala by som aj ďalšie poviedky v angličtine :) Viem, že si sa s tým babrala, tak ti tu nebudem vyčítať nejaké chyby. Samozrejme, že sa niečo objavilo, ale myslím, že sme to aj tak všetci pochopili :) A navyše, ako sa tu už hovorilo, máš fakt veľkú slovnú zásobu v angličtine a obdivujem ťa, ako to dokážeš využiť :) Takže prestaň trepať, že to je hrozné! :D vôbec na to nemáš dôvod :)
OdpovedaťOdstrániťdakujem :) a ano ta gramatika je otrasna :D ale ta co us :D
OdstrániťPrestaň :D neviem ako by to dopadlo, keby že ja píšem po anglicky :D
OdstrániťJe to krásne!♥ V angličtine je to podla mna ešte lepšie!♥ Len sa toho drž a bola by som rada, ak by si viac jednodieloviek alebo možno aj viacdieloviek napísala po anj:))
OdpovedaťOdstrániťuvidime ci sa bude dat :) mozno ak budu napady :) a vdaka
OdstrániťOmg nič nerozumiem daj to aj po sk prosiiin :)))
OdpovedaťOdstrániťmozno to prelozim ak bude cas :) ale momentalne fakt nic nestiham
OdstrániťJe to nádherné :DD Myslela som, že tomu rozumieť nebudem , ale rozumela som D:DDD Našťastie som to zvládla, síce s pomocou slovníka, ale to nevadí :DDD ... Máš dokonalú slovnú zásobu :DDD Je skvelé , že to vieš aj využiť :D A tá jednodielovka by mohla byť s Liamom :D
OdpovedaťOdstrániťdakujem :) a mne tiez pomahal slovnik ;)
OdstrániťJé, rozumela som! :D ♥ Tiež si myslím, že v angličtine to vyznelo lepšie. :) Super! ;)
OdpovedaťOdstrániť*Aďka*
dakujem :)
OdstrániťSuper :) A dalsia so Zaynom
OdpovedaťOdstrániťWow , je to úžasné :) Najprv som si to nechcela prečítať lebo to bolo v angličtine , ale som rada , že som si to prečítala rozumela som takmer všetkému :) a budem rada ked urobíš aj daľšiu jednodielovku v angličtine :) aspon sa viac naučím :) a učitelka nebude domna hustit , že nič neviem :D
OdpovedaťOdstrániťdakujem :D len neviem ci ti tato poviedka velmi pomoze, mozno tak so slovickami, lebo gramatika je uplne od veci, som vobec nepozerala na spravnost :)
OdstrániťNo ja hlavne potrebujem tú slovnú zásobu lebo stou som na dne :/
Odstrániťno to hej :) to je okrem gramatiky to najdolezitejsie :) ja sa ju ucim najma z lyrics a pozeram filmy v anglictine s anglickymi titulkami plus knihy anglicke citam :) ale i tak ju este az tak velmi dobre neviem :)
Odstrániťpri prvej vete som sa strašne zľakla, či tomu budem rozumieť ale našťastie hej a je to fakt super :)
OdpovedaťOdstrániťdakujem :)
OdstrániťTento komentár bol odstránený autorom.
OdpovedaťOdstrániťvdaka :)
Odstrániťsom rada že som aspon niečo rozumelo ale bodlo by keby si to dala ja v slovenčine ak méš napisane či som spravne roozumela :)
OdpovedaťOdstrániťnemam napisane po slovenyks :) uz to potom nedokazem prelozit ak to nepisem hned :) no mozno skusim ked bude cas :)
OdstrániťJeeee Hanna Marin (Ashley Benson) :-D:-D Ta poviedka je uzasna a este stale sa cudujem ze som tomu rozumela :-D btw aj ty ozeravas PLL ? :-D
OdpovedaťOdstrániťdakujem :) a nie, vobec to nepozeram a niektore tie obrazky su len nahodne :)
Odstrániťvery good :) máš pravdu, že to má trošku divný koniec, ale je to predsa jednodielovka :). A privítala by som častejšie niečo také v angličtine....predsa treba vedieť po anglicky, kebyže stretnem chalanov :D
OdpovedaťOdstrániťAko dlho ti to trvalo napísať?
P.S. Niekde som čítala, že si občas chalani čítajú fanstories....no a teraz budú aj rozumieť keďže je to v angline :D
Odstrániťdakujem :) aspon niekto, kto so mnou suhlasi, som rada :) tak asi o polovicu dlhsie :) lebo predsa len som vsetky slovicka nevypotila sama a ku koncu uz nebol ani napad :) a dobre ze si povedala o tom :) to aby som zacvala vsetko prekladat :D
OdstrániťLauríí ?! Nejakú časť som si preložila sama, ale predsa len všetko som nevedela.. :/ Mohla by si k tomu dať preklad ?! :) Ďakujem :)
OdpovedaťOdstrániťskusim ak bude cas :) lebo momentalne nestiham ani Coincidence pisat :)
OdstrániťJasné.. chápem. a ďakujem :)
OdstrániťAhooooj dala by si preklad prosím ??
OdpovedaťOdstrániťak bude cas :)
OdstrániťAhooj laura pridas preklad ako čítam viaceré si všetko neprelozili samé prosiim nájdi si čas... Vďaka :))
OdpovedaťOdstrániťpokusim sa :) len momentalne nestiham ani Coincidence novu cast lebo vela mam ucenia a skoly :)
Odstrániťcelkom v pohode to je len ten anglický jakzyk nie je boh vie čo ... taký predpritomný alebo predminulý čas ti asi veľa nehovorí, treba sa doučiť ... ale snažila si sa tak je to dobré, neže sa naštveš za môj názor
OdpovedaťOdstrániťamericka anglictina pefect tanses nepouziva :) treba si aj vsimat, v akej anglictine to pisem ;-) nehovorim, ze som v anglictine dokonala a samozrejme, ze robm chyby, ale tie casy nepouzivam zamerne
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